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Halloween Contest Results!

Journal Entry: Fri Nov 2, 2007, 3:19 PM
Hey, we've got the results and additional feedback. Not sure if the feedback will be helpful to those who entered but if you have any questions about what the judges said then please don't hesitate us.

Sadly we only had to entries so the prizes have been changed slightly. Details will follow the results.

:iconleash1994: Have her feedback and scores first since she's in charge. ;p

The Gift of a Scream

Technical: 8/10 The set up is a bit strange, but it works, so yeah. :o
Artistic: 9/10 Could have used more description in the characters, but I found it to be very intriguing. I loved the many goose bump raising similes.
Tilt: 10/10 gave me the creeps, which is the meaning of Christma- I mean Halloween. :confused:
Total: 27/30

To Riku letters

Technical: 7/10 Umm, I don't know, I guess it's the set up again. :o
Artistic: 8/10 Who would ever know that a short little letter could have so much description? Although, the lack of depth did take off a point or so here. :hmm:
Tilt: 9/10 great! ^^ I don't know why, but it was!
Total: 24/30

:icontheeforsakenone: Yeah, I'm paying for this so I'm judging. :paranoid:

The Gift of a Scream

Technical: 9/10 A couple of very minor errors.
Artistic: 8/10 Excellent imagery and the theme was conveyed brilliantly. The use of writing like the speech of the father for the most part was excellent and created an excellent atmosphere.
Tilt: 7/10 Excellent story. (Sorry I'm too tired to come up with synonyms)
Total: 24/30

To Riku letters

Technical: 6/10 Sadly had a lot of errors although they didn't detract from the story too much.
Artistic: 8/10 The use of a letter format written from the perspective of the character was an good choice. Made it feel far more personal and what the character was trying to say was conveyed very well despite the technical errors.
Tilt: 9/10 I found it very touching... which is a rarity for me so I had to give it a high mark for this.
Total: 23/30

So overall the scores are:

The Gift of a Scream: 25.5/30
To Riku letters: 23.5/30

So final positions are:

1st :iconnobodysson:
2nd :icontnracegirl:

Your prizes will be as follows:

1st: Two requests from :icontheeforsakenone: and three month subscription.
2nd: One request from :icontheeforsakenone: and one month subscription.

The requests can be anything art or writing related. Personally, I prefer writing or colouring in pics but I can do other things (except poetry which I can't), whatever you prefer. :nod:

Expect a journal soon about the next competition.

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~RogueVanHelsing:iconRogueVanHelsing: May 8, 2008, 6:18:03 PM
Hey I was wonderin' if I may join?

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~Story-club:iconStory-club: Dec 1, 2007, 11:24:01 AM
:D

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*Memnalar:iconMemnalar: Nov 30, 2007, 9:33:53 AM Mood: Joy
Thanks for the watch! Glad to be a member.

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=Litylon:iconLitylon: Nov 3, 2007, 1:59:33 PM
No problem. Thanks anyway^^

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~Story-club:iconStory-club: Nov 1, 2007, 2:58:38 PM
Hmm well really we only accept pictures in the form of comics. Shame, though... It's a really nice pic but not really what we're looking for. :hmm:

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=Litylon:iconLitylon: Nov 1, 2007, 10:59:52 AM
I want to participate with this one [link]

Well, I just saw Leash's journal right now, I was a bit out of DA these last days.
I hope I can make part of it.^^

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~Story-club:iconStory-club: Oct 31, 2007, 3:17:33 PM
:D

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~tnracegirl:icontnracegirl: Oct 31, 2007, 1:42:23 PM
your welcome! ^^ :rofl:

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~Story-club:iconStory-club: Oct 30, 2007, 4:39:16 PM
Thank you very much. :thanks:

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~tnracegirl:icontnracegirl: Oct 30, 2007, 4:19:35 PM
ENTRY ENTRY HERE! finnaly!
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halloween contest entry

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~leash1994:iconleash1994: Oct 29, 2007, 3:55:56 PM
oh, yeah, sorry! ^^;

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~Story-club:iconStory-club: Oct 29, 2007, 2:21:38 PM
You could have just noted me... I'll forward the entries I have.

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~leash1994:iconleash1994: Oct 29, 2007, 1:19:59 PM
Hey, could I see some of the entries? :o

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*overfiend-87:iconoverfiend-87: Oct 21, 2007, 10:26:44 AM
lol nice to hear I got it right :D

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my :gallery: might have something that interests you :).

Come look at look at cowell81 stories. Take it from me. I live in fiction and he writes like a pro.
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~Story-club:iconStory-club: Oct 21, 2007, 7:38:09 AM
Actually there is in the journal but you sent a note anyway so welcome. :aww:

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*overfiend-87:iconoverfiend-87: Oct 21, 2007, 6:55:40 AM
interesting...certainly would like to join, though no instructions on how to do so...

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my :gallery: might have something that interests you :).

Come look at look at cowell81 stories. Take it from me. I live in fiction and he writes like a pro.
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~Story-club:iconStory-club: Jul 5, 2007, 4:25:30 PM
You're welcome! :D

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~Arrested-for-DUI:iconArrested-for-DUI: Jul 4, 2007, 10:56:39 AM
thanks for the :+fav: :)

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~Story-club:iconStory-club: Apr 22, 2007, 8:53:18 AM
thanks! :hug:

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